So he'd run on automatic, and Mab wouldn't be able to tell because Faeries can't soulgaze.
I thought this came across pretty clearly, actually! Harry was so concerned about John doing it while her attention was elsewhere, it definitely made me think of a kind of mercy killing.
Okay, whew, then I somewhat managed to strike the balance between no-terrible-exposition and just-enough-information-to-make-it-plausible. That's good to know.
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Re: Terrible Fill 2/2
Date: 2011-03-08 01:35 pm (UTC)I thought this came across pretty clearly, actually! Harry was so concerned about John doing it while her attention was elsewhere, it definitely made me think of a kind of mercy killing.
Re: Terrible Fill 2/2
Date: 2011-03-08 05:24 pm (UTC)