Ohhh... This made me speechless, anon, this was so hurty and so good. You captured the NM relationship between Harry and John so perfectly... sure this isn't one of the original writers?? if you aren't, please take this as a compliment as the original story is just brilliant, one of my favourites! That contrast between happy NM!Harry and the love and trust he and John share and what's there in Marcone's world, you got that spot on, just the gut punch I had in mind while requesting this.
The sex was super hot. The level of understanding John and Marcone recognise in each other was, somehow, hotter. The fact that John could be generous, whereas Marcone can't see himself being that way... just says so much. Wibbling for Marcone throughout -- all the things he finds sweet about NM!Harry and contrasts with Harry-as-he-is for him; and how tries and fails to make his peace with the all the what-ifs, the Amanda Beckitt one got me hard -- the man deserves so many hugs :(
I can't even begin to quote all the lines that were brilliant... everything from the threshold to the the teasing Marcone about the way he spoke, the one-shouldered shrug to the radio stations to polish up their accent, and HENDRICKSSS <3 <3 AND THOMAS <33
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Re: Fill: 3-way Mirror 2/2
Date: 2011-02-27 02:12 pm (UTC)Ohhh... This made me speechless, anon, this was so hurty and so good. You captured the NM relationship between Harry and John so perfectly... sure this isn't one of the original writers?? if you aren't, please take this as a compliment as the original story is just brilliant, one of my favourites! That contrast between happy NM!Harry and the love and trust he and John share and what's there in Marcone's world, you got that spot on, just the gut punch I had in mind while requesting this.
The sex was super hot. The level of understanding John and Marcone recognise in each other was, somehow, hotter. The fact that John could be generous, whereas Marcone can't see himself being that way... just says so much. Wibbling for Marcone throughout -- all the things he finds sweet about NM!Harry and contrasts with Harry-as-he-is for him; and how tries and fails to make his peace with the all the what-ifs, the Amanda Beckitt one got me hard -- the man deserves so many hugs :(
I can't even begin to quote all the lines that were brilliant... everything from the threshold to the the teasing Marcone about the way he spoke, the one-shouldered shrug to the radio stations to polish up their accent, and HENDRICKSSS <3 <3 AND THOMAS <33
Thank you for this brilliant fill!
*still blown away by it, goes back for a re read*