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scribe_protra ([personal profile] scribe_protra) wrote2011-02-06 09:43 pm
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Fill: Jackpot [Jack/Thomas, 1/?]

(Anonymous) 2011-03-10 06:48 am (UTC)(link)
Jack, as he so often did, found himself at a bar. He'd heard the beer at this one was really great, best beer around, and Jack loved trying new beers. It was astonishing how much variety there was in beer across human history, and Jack had an ongoing project to find the best beer of all time.

At least, that was his excuse.

Not that he needed one.

So there he sat, sipping from a bottle of really quite astonishing beer and admiring the other patrons, when he got an admiring glance in return.

Well. Who was Jack to turn down an invitation? He stood up and sauntered over to the table, a wide smile on his face as he approached the man who sat there. Tall, pale, with dark hair curling enticingly about his ears, a face Jack could happily stare at for hours, and a body Jack would love to get his hands on. Mmm.

"Hi," he said. "I'm Jack. Can I buy you a drink?"

The gorgeous young man's lips curved into a gorgeous smile. "Of course," he said. "Or -" he flicked an openly admiring glance at Jack "- we could skip the drink and move straight to the main course."

Jack grinned, delighted. Straight-forward sex was often difficult in the twenty-first century; there were so many hang-ups to be wary of. But this man seemed to know what he was about. "I'm all yours," Jack said.

The man's smile widened, and he stood. "I'm Thomas," he said, and kissed him.

The feel of Thomas' lips on his was amazing, and Jack opened his mouth to kiss back enthusiastically, tongue darting out to lick at Thomas, Thomas' mouth opening in response, and Jack hummed and pressed forward, body hard against the firm lines of Thomas, pushing him back, pushing him down, until Thomas was on the stool again and Jack was sitting on top of him, the evidence of Thomas' arousal obvious against him.

Jack hummed again, warmth and pleasure thrumming through his body, and ground against Thomas' cock until Thomas was gasping.

"Let's get out of here," Thomas said into Jack's lips, breath hitching, but that would mean stopping, and Thomas felt so good against him. "Mm," he said instead, letting one hand wander down Thomas' back until it was reaching into his pants, savouring the feel of Thomas' skin. Thomas moaned in response, his own hands roaming eagerly over Jack's shoulders, but then with an obvious effort of will he pulled his head back, and looked Jack in the eyes.

"No," he said. "Let's do this properly or not at all. Now, are you with me?"

Jack sighed, a little regretful, but he knew Thomas had a point. Sex in a populated bar in the 21st century wasn't quite the done thing, and would doubtless draw ire and, more importantly, interruptions. "Absolutely," he said. "Where to?"

"I know a place nearby."

"Great!"

After a moment, Thomas said pointedly, "You have to get up first if we're to go anywhere."

So Jack gave a squeeze to Thomas' ass, stood, and then followed Thomas out the door.


[[Can someone more familiar with DF canon than me give me details on how White Court feeding works? Because I no longer remember what little I once knew, and I really want to work that stuff in here, but I don't want to make any stupid mistakes. Thanks!]]

Re: Fill: Jackpot [Jack/Thomas, 1/?]

(Anonymous) 2011-03-10 07:16 am (UTC)(link)
[[Also, if you notice anywhere I could improve, in terms of style or content or characterization or anything else, PLEASE do let me know; I won't be offended! I want to do this prompt as much justice as I can, and the only way I can get better is with feedback.]]

[[Goddamn, brief anonfail there. YOU DIDN'T SEE THAT.]]

Re: Fill: Jackpot [Jack/Thomas, 1/?]

(Anonymous) 2011-03-10 02:18 pm (UTC)(link)
this is great, and I'm so much looking forward to more of this. I love the idea that the two of them will figure out their peculiarities so they can have lots of safe/sane/consensual six where Thomas gets to eat as much as he wants and Jack get to have the full White Court experience again and again.

And I wonder if his life tastes different!

(I don't think there's that much detail about how it works. They feed off of lust or other intimacy, and it takes some of your life force, and in theory that life force can be somehow regrown eventually -- Justine says something about "medication" but doesn't elaborate. Thomas can have sex while only taking a little, though it's not clear if he can have sex while not taking any.)

Re: Fill: Jackpot [Jack/Thomas, 1/?]

(Anonymous) 2011-03-10 04:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much!

[[awesome, good to know. Just to make sure, it feels really good for the person being fed from, right?]]

Re: Fill: Jackpot [Jack/Thomas, 1/?]

(Anonymous) 2011-03-10 04:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Yep!
ventureforth: princess cimorene, \o/ (Default)

Re: Fill: Jackpot [Jack/Thomas, 1/?]

[personal profile] ventureforth 2011-03-10 05:23 pm (UTC)(link)
My joy is difficult to textually render. However ...

*\o/* *\o/* *\o/*

Re: Fill: Jackpot [Jack/Thomas, 1/?] OP ses

(Anonymous) 2011-03-10 08:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, brilliant!

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!


This is a great start, I am so excited. If Thomas kills Jack, he's ghoing to be *really* surprised ten minutes later.

*settles down to wait with a happy grin*