so I couldn't manage tposting it here (I'm not very technologically apt- sorry) So I posted it in the scarpbook for my deviant art account for the moment and I'm giving you guys the link- I'd love work with some of the wonderful people here who gave suffestions on how to post it but for the meantime anyways

http://snakeyear.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps#/d3ayqyf