EEEEE. OMG, this is amazing, and I love the idea of the Jack Hawksmoor thing.
(as person you're replying to: the exact scene is not necessary, I was just trying to give the idea of him out-marcone-ing Marcone. And I think you are managing that just fine.)
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(as person you're replying to: the exact scene is not necessary, I was just trying to give the idea of him out-marcone-ing Marcone. And I think you are managing that just fine.)