I think Harry's guilt makes sense, given that he was the inadvertent cause of Charity slipping. (Even if he hadn't been, of course, he would probably blame himself). And it is going to give him all the stronger motive to work with and for Michael's family.
And right now, at least, I'm inspired to write a whole lot more of this story.
Re: Fill, 1/?: Rejoice in Thy Labor
I think Harry's guilt makes sense, given that he was the inadvertent cause of Charity slipping. (Even if he hadn't been, of course, he would probably blame himself). And it is going to give him all the stronger motive to work with and for Michael's family.
And right now, at least, I'm inspired to write a whole lot more of this story.